Friday, November 3, 2006

Arduous Comments

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five thousand
two hundred
thirty seven steps
to the edge of the
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Ben Partenay
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Jo Fitzsimmons 12 November 2006

Compact poem that conveys a lot of meaning

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R H 07 November 2006

Like the image of the boats looking like pale leaves... A contemplative write Ben, Justine

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