Tuesday, January 24, 2017

Ardor, Appetite And Amore Comments

Rating: 4.5

The gargantuan commotion,
contusions, and rugged muscles-bones
The liquid plasma that shoots out
from unlocked and unbar lesions
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Shakira Nandini
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Denis Mair 07 September 2020

Voltage too high for the faint of heart It's some kind of fusion reaction Against the edge of naked action Shooting rapids of the soul's river In an elastic flesh-colored raft Drops of spray intersect with light An eternally expanding implosion Defying walls of sedimentation Snapping back from collisions Until ripples in your nerve net Light it up like a christmas tree

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Khairul Ahsan 03 September 2020

This poem is quite different from your other poems, other themes on which you usually write.

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Neptune Barman 24 January 2017

Beautifully expressed the feelings of poet in words

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Neptune Barman 24 January 2017

Very beautiful poetry.The poet`s feelings is expressed in each word

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