Sunday, December 28, 2008

Ardent Love Comments

Rating: 3.5

Be my apostrophe before S
I'll second that motion
The possession beyond space and time
When the nude love swims in our notion
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Lovely poem of love and passion.. nice one

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 December 2018

No I need more ecstasy A dropp of your eyes' ocean. very romantic to the point of becoming. thanku dear poet. tony

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 29 December 2014

Give me a glass of wine darling A glass of love potion No I need more ecstasy A droop of your eyes' ocean Beautifully composed love poem.Well expressed Well done Col Muhammad Khalid khan

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Mihaela Pirjol 18 July 2014

A lovely poem, a truly ardent love expressed in a unique style.I love it! Thank you.

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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

When the nude love swims in our notion Rachel Ann Butler

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<font color =fusha>Amy 02 August 2009

Very nicely put true passion :) nice write

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Miriam Maia Padua 18 July 2009

very romantic...flows with passion... finely written love is...flowing.. 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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To love someone special with a love as deep as the ocean in that person's soul is one of life's greatest shared gifts.This is very beautiful.A ten! ! ! ! !

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Jihad T 17 January 2009

oh god so so wonderful 10

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sumaira .....ir 07 January 2009

It's a lovely poem which touches my heart....

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Malini Kadir 05 January 2009

you do amuse with your ardent poems....! lovely! ! ! indeed....ardent!

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wow you amused me again with this poem... a fine love poem... nice

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The eyes have it here! They rounded off the poem beautifully. A love poem of true art. Karin Anderson

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Lynda Robson 02 January 2009

I love the last two lines of this poem, excellent work, Happy New Year Nightingale 10 Lynda xx

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Thad Wilk 01 January 2009

If you second that motion an have a glass of wine and love potion, i got the notion that a dropp from her eyes ocean, might be too much - emotion..? Another splendid read Shiraz! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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C T Heart 01 January 2009

A glass of Champange to celebrate your love and this prosperous and happy 2009...a 10

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Vinod Kumar 31 December 2008

Unveiling the pleasent moments of deep love a very good presentation dear author, Thank you for sharing the wonderful composition, Happy Muharram, Happy 2009.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 30 December 2008

My ardent love of heavenly hue with emotion glues for my deaest beloved left me without clue............... Good work.........

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Sandra Fowler 29 December 2008

Timeless sentiments. Eloquently penned. You have a way with words. Warm regards, Sandra

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XXxxKimberleyxxXX .. 28 December 2008

nice keep up the good work :)

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