Sunday, February 6, 2011

Arctic Wolf (Original Version) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The arctic wolf that runs alone
Light on the frost, skin and bone
Lives by a melancholy tone
It has nothing softer than stone
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Ian McArthur
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Natasha Kirke 14 November 2012

The short, harsh life of the arctic fox told in rhymes and a wonderful arrangent of words! I get great visual imagery from this poem! It is very gloomy but beautiful - hmm...us humans are rather attracted to gloom, I know that I love morbid and gloomy art, songs and poetry!

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Elena Sandu 23 June 2011

This is a jewel of a write! Who wouldn't love it? ! I am glad you could rewrite it, lucky again, (I can never remember what I write, I just put them in a hurry without much thoughts and then forget all about, lol.) Thank you for writing such a beautiful poem! Looved it! !

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Ouch G. Hetrick 27 April 2011

I really am inspired by that. :) The ending is really teary and the rhyming is good. :)

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