Tall and thin
and chicken-limbed,
her beady eyes bespectacled,
reflected primordial times
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The concept. The title...makes for a winning poem! Very nice, Tan. Well done. L
Nice creative analogy Tan. It was even a bit humorous. I wonder if this is some of your more recent work?
Awesome write Tan. This one reminds me of my old Sunday School teacher who frightened us littlies by demanded respect and instilled the fear of God. Much enjoyed the relived shiver.
Wow! I could interpret this a couple different ways... Metanym for? ? ? (Afraid to say....) . Well done!