Friday, February 3, 2006

Archaeopteryx Comments

Rating: 4.5

Tall and thin
and chicken-limbed,
her beady eyes bespectacled,
reflected primordial times
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Tan Pratonix
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Pamela Sinicrope 11 September 2015

Wow! I could interpret this a couple different ways... Metanym for? ? ? (Afraid to say....) . Well done!

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 07 February 2006

Interesting if not a little creepy...nicely done.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 03 February 2006

The concept. The title...makes for a winning poem! Very nice, Tan. Well done. L

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Solomon Brook 03 February 2006

Nice creative analogy Tan. It was even a bit humorous. I wonder if this is some of your more recent work?

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Simone Inez Harriman 03 February 2006

Awesome write Tan. This one reminds me of my old Sunday School teacher who frightened us littlies by demanded respect and instilled the fear of God. Much enjoyed the relived shiver.

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