Archaeology Comments

I liked your poem a great deal and gave it the highest rating. There is a word usage problem I have. You use the phrase 'crazy-like strikes'. To my American English accustomed ears, this term is hard to interpret. Perhaps it is one of these terms like 'bonnet' which means one thing in American English and another in British English...and I assume Pakistani English has its won ideosyncracies.

I'm glad this has the title it does. Such a title goes a long way in helping the reader understand the meaning contained within the writing. I give thanks to the writer for his courtesy to the readers. GW62

Interesting poem. Well done. HG: -) xx

yet another wonderful poem...i jst posted 'moving amidst spoils of time' if u hv time...

Silence suddenly rebounds And reverberates. Beautiful! ! ! !

Nothing short of genius

The discription is superb. Makes the comunication so much better. Very good 10

This poem is great. Thanks for sharing.

this is a good poem. I love nature and can visualize this very well. keep up the good work :)

A well written poem. Good job.

Beautiful poem. Visualisation can be made very easily, very clearly Beautiful poem.

Very well writtn Sir. Used good, apt language.

good write...i can visualize harappa and mohenjadaro.......

Nice flow of words! I love it!

I love the way it builds up the excitement of the persona with ever longer lines until the last 'sentence' where he/she is simply amazed and curious ^^ I'm not fast to use the word 'masterpiece' but I'd definetly call it a 'mastrefully-written-piece'.

Taut and immensely satisfying to read.

I have to say I love this poem. Reading this poem the sound of the words reminds me of a song. Your word choice is perfect. I love it.10 10 10 10 10

One word 'Archaeology' is well defined in so many words in a poetry order

Your words in the poem are witness in every stop of this creative world....

it describes the title so well, nice written though! ! ! ! !