Friday, July 1, 2022

Arcane Comments

Rating: 5.0

Heaven conceals its
arcane passions
towards earth voluptuous
under its dark velvety robes
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Rebecca Navarre 05 July 2022

Thought it would be something So beautiful as such! .. Thank you Unnikrishnan! .. Definite 5 Stars+++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 04 July 2022

I will come back on ratings although you always write with such a deep beauty! .. Many blessings Unnikrishnan! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 04 July 2022

Do you mean like the fields longing for rain and then at last the heavens pour down?

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You got it exactly right, Becca. The longing, the passion is from both Earth as well as Heavens. Nice feeling, as you are reading into the very heart of the poem. So happy.

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" LeeAnn Azzopardi rated a poem titled Arcane 5- start ratings" Thank you LeeAnn. Obliged

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Arcane heavenly passions…

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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