Sunday, August 20, 2017

Arach-No-Phobia Comments

Rating: 4.8

I'm not afraid of a little spider!
I just felt startled when I spied her
Descending on transparent thread
A mere three inches from my head.
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Grace Diane Jessen
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Cowboy Ron Williams 11 August 2020

This is a brilliant poem, carefully woven like a spider's web! Your talent is amazing!

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 September 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Grace. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Kim Barney 23 August 2017

Clever title, and outstanding poem. The rhyme pattern of each stanza is that of a limerick, but the meter is not the same. Majority of the lines have eight syllables. A very pleasing effect. Your choice of words to keep the thing flowing and making sense is unmatched by anyone on this website. Superb!

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Spock The Vegan 21 August 2017

Great little poem. I especially like the title. Thanks for it.

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Douglas Scotney 20 August 2017

good Not the type to live in fear of tiny creatures crawling near; nor to panic at sight of spider, aka arachnida; Grace prayed simply, 'Disappear.' Or, what did she do? Something about a shoe.

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