Saturday, May 31, 2008

Arabian Mirage Comments

Rating: 5.0

Crawling towards a distant delusion,
I reach the illusionary lush green oasis,
where the cool blue waters offer me their luscious lips
to quench my insatiable thirst of centuries.
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Bharat Trivedi
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Ying Escalona 07 January 2009

I hallucinate of semi-clad Arabian dancers! Their bare bellies sway real or mirage.....i like the former :)

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Manonton Dalan 21 September 2008

a journey laced with gyrating hips to oasis of water caressing lips and back to sand of sahara; dust life is like that so enjoy, you must. md. thanks beautiful.

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Sangeetha Pandaram 12 August 2008

You have certainly worked magic with your words, Bharat. An immaculate production. Well done! Sangeetha

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