Thursday, September 29, 2011

Arab League, Tom And Jerry, Julia Roberts Comments

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tom
jerry my jerry
come to join
to arab league
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ahmed khaled
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Renu Kakkar 30 September 2011

nice....... description..enjoyed the read......please read my poems too

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Unwritten Soul 29 September 2011

Tom and Jerry, a kid's time travel for me...A Cat and a mouse, two but never be one, trick with gimmick, enemy to be friend sounds never happen till the end, if miracle it will happen and it did sometimes in few episodes...A nice way of writing but not that happiest one..Thanks for Inviting Ahmed_Unwritten Soul

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Allemagne Roßmann 29 September 2011

Hilarious write...deep allusions also having an undercurrent..you have the philosophical analysis of the well known to give the past a run for life..

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Vipins Puthooran 29 September 2011

Nice one.good flow can make a song.. Nice effort to describe an Arab man.

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Jim Troy 29 September 2011

Playful and a joy to read... good way to start the day... Hope your day is full of everything beautiful Jim Troy

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Markus Kwila Kitibo 29 September 2011

nice piece. i have to read it over again to get the picture, nice use of character here. you reminded me of a poem i read some times a go. where the poet made an attempt to describe the Arab man. i love it

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