Saturday, February 11, 2012

Aquarius Comments

Rating: 4.7

The Fish are dying!

Polluted our crystal clear waters -
our once green valleys, choked and grey
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Valerie Dohren
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the end of one era and the beginning of another cycle..

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 07 May 2014

very nice imagery...this poem is very cool!

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Amitava Sur 14 April 2014

A very thoughtful write detailing how the nature is threatened, though we try to camouflage .

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Heather Wilkins 31 July 2013

this is the age of Aquarius good read

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Chris Blazo 14 August 2012

I really like how you feel in this write. We actually have very similar thoughts on nature. I am an avid birder too! Good job on the portraying of anger towards destruction and being kept under finger!

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Richard D. Remler 23 May 2012

Stark observations. Fierce reminder that just because we live here, it doesn't mean we own the place. Great write.

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Indira Babbellapati 21 May 2012

concern for the world...

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Heather Wilson 11 April 2012

A good insight into the world today, a very descriptive poem, nice one.

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Valerie Dohren

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