Man moves with the wind assisting his respiration
hope moves man in finding his way and direction;
love keeps forgetting its existence and action
truth keeps circling the heart for its perception;
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Explicit poetry. Every word touched the heart Instilling hope that was lost. Very encouraging poem. Awesome beautiful. Appreciations.
Gold fish swimming with noble inclinations" . Superb conceptualization in the beautifully penned inspirational life song. Hearty congrats on poem of the day.
man never fears to live, love or try new permutations; for in the pursuit of victory there is never any limitation when man is the gold fish swimming with noble inclination. Noble inclination that drives a human being to greatness. a very fine poem. tony
Hope keeps life flowing and this is a remarkable poem about it. Congratulations for having it as poem of the day.
Brilliant stroke upholding optimistic approach of life.... A deserving poem for the POD. Congrats!
Like a gold fish, man daunts in pursuit of achieving success in his mission as nothing can. Nice composition to read! ! Congratulations to the Poet for the selection of his poem as Member Poem of the Day by PH!
Nice motivational poem and it gives a hope to us to live this life. Congrats.
An excellent poem! Many congratulations for this wonderful piece of work being selected as Poem of the Day!
he will run, he will chase until it is time for jubilation and whether it is loss or gain, birth or burial as option, man never fears to live, love or try new permutations; for in the pursuit of victory there is never any limitation when man is the gold fish swimming with noble inclination. - -A fine poem about the determination and hope- -Congratulations
Made second visit to this beautiful poem on hope, justice, isolation and redemption. Congratulations for being chosen this poem as the member poem of the poem of the day for second time.
An insightful philosophical reflection elegantly crafted in verse with rhythmic splendour. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing, Bernedita.
I guess it depends on the man. Some men persevere, others disappear. There's telling it like it is. Powerful write. tfs
Thank you Richard for your kind comment. My son Moses is a young lawyer and he is very dedicated to his profession. He is a pro-bono advocate and does not charge any fees for his services. I like to encourage him. So I write a poem sometimes to encourage his noble intentions.
Great inspirational poem that describes the positive victorious fight back. And this hope is key to win. Awesome.
Thank you Varsha for appreciating my poem. God bless you for your kind words! You are so right to say - fight back for positive victory. You understood the poem correctly!
Nicely written poem here Bernedita! No limitations here! Just keep pushing on through with all hope!
Thanks Ronell for your comment. Life imposes responsibilities and only time and experiences promote victory. As a mother my supportive words is my gift to my my son.
A wonderful poem imbued with wisdom. Very inspiring. Beautifully crafted and well executed write. Congratulations!
Sweet Rose Marie, I thank you for your sincere comments about my Poem. It is very nice when someone appreciates and expresses their true opinion. Thank you once again. Don't forget to read my other poems.
" In the pursuit of victory there is never any limitations" . Grand conceptualization. Congrats on well deserved poem of the Day.
Ratnakar, Thank you for your encouraging words. It is only when a bird finds it's broken wings not permitting it to fly, helplessness takes over but man never gives up his pursuit for justice and success. This is what life is all about.
But like a gold fish in aquarium... beautiful poetic exprei.