Tuesday, February 2, 2010

Aquarium Comments

Rating: 2.7

Resplendid lines on horse back
Covered with muslin
The red were splashing the blue
The blue giving hues of the red
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Brian Jani 23 June 2014

Indeed this poem.paints a high resolution picture and it was my pleasure reading it

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Raj Arumugam 20 February 2010

enjoyed the picture-painting through your diction and phrasing...

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Raj Arumugam 20 February 2010

enjoyed the picture-painting through your diction and phrasing...

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Allemagne Roßmann 19 February 2010

Resplendid lines on horse back Covered with muslin The red were splashing Very suggestive and economy of words ---well elucidated.

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Kesav Easwaran 06 February 2010

thematic...liked the verbal presentation very much...10

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