Aquamarine Comments

nice metaphoric expression: '' I remember my dreams in pure aquamarine please wake me up now please wake me up '' very touching poem...........10

very nice. You had some rhyme, yet you weren't very particular about it. I enjoyed it.

An interesting twist of events. Not just a presentation but a question to be pondered. I like the rhymes and especially the first two lines which read very fluently and set a nice atmosphere in which to picture the events portrayed. I remember my dreams in pure aquamarine They add color and music and you do well in repeating it.

Thats good really good ^^

For a minute there it felt like I inhabited somebody elses mind. Somebody very dreamy and bereft and poetic. I love the abstract way the lines seem to fit together.

caught in the gossamer of dreams...well written

good poem........we have to wake up to face the reality though........ excellently done