Friday, July 12, 2019

Aquamarine Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dark, brown, hazel
Thy hairs, I'm keen to sense
For my eyes narrate, ardur's resemblance, a peach
But my soul, finds her to be aquamarine.
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Sunil Shandilya
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MirNajeeb09 28 July 2019

Wonderful poetic masterpiece. A Nerudian and Frostian mixture of hopelessness and desire. Please write more like these. Your muse must be be delightful.

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Sunil Shandilya 28 July 2019

I will, in time for sure. Thanks for the review, my friend

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 July 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Sunil Shandilya. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 July 2019

I'd dive in thee a beautiful exotic desire so freely exposed as thee should I suppose well done friend she will come along timely to open the sea you will truly see you need to only know them

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Sunil Shandilya 14 July 2019

Its different, diving in thee is like really knowing her. Thanks for the analysis, friend.

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