Friday, May 25, 2018

Aqua Power Comments

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Just a stroll
By the side
On the sea shore
Steady waves
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Vijay Sai R
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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 May 2018

THREE: Thank you for the invitation to come here and read your finest poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 May 2018

TWO: to go to return to normal again. then there is still the big question: Can it? Leaders of the country must be joint working in a diligent way. A fascinating poem, finest descriptions about the heavy pollutions at own spot. A 10 for the Vote.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 May 2018

ONE: Surroundings oft make influence upon a creation of the poet, and so this is. Long gone beauty makes place for indigestible apathy. Poets oft conjure magic and this is the reverse. As a geographical admirer, some most precious and loved places are known to me, but you are absolutely right, the damaged done needs years t

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Bri Edwards 27 May 2018

this line i do not understand (though i like alliterations!) : Still visible visionary....but i like the poem very much and shall send to MyPoemList. favorite lines: A perfect scene Of indigestible apathy well done. it is read with the swiftness of the approaching water! thanks for sharing! bri ;)

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Anjandev Roy 27 May 2018

beautiful poem. i enjoyed it. anjandev roy.

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Bharati Nayak 26 May 2018

A lovely poem about the changing face of nature- - At one moment it is perfect calm, at other moment it a force of destruction - - -

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Wonderfully worded and excellently express is this creative and compelling composition that moves from calm to storm in a seamless impeccable manner. Well done my friend!

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Robert Murray Smith 25 May 2018

A clever poem. Very impressive.

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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