Aqua Marinae (Haiku) Comments
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Muse! Beneath the sunlight; with the ways of nature. nice work.
Fantastic magery, one of my favourite forms of poetry.....
Hello Mihaela! The haiku is always a poem which can stand as pure observation, with maybe a quiet meditation implied or stated. That's how I read this, but then I wondered if something more threatening was meant. Certain words took on danger: could the swirling mean danger? Am I over-reacting or is there peril in paradise? (I hope not.)
Hello poet Mihaela. Absolutely beautiful, I enjoyed, Loyd
Beautiful Haiku! Shadows and unseen currents, in dusky colors. Very-very interesting! (:
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8/3/2025 8:43:58 AM # 1.0.0
An insightful haiku nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.