Friday, April 6, 2018

April's Fooling Snow Comments

Rating: 4.9

April brings the snow,
Makes many hearts glow.
What a fuss folks make,
Like gales in circles blow.
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Perdita Young (Hanna Wang)
COMMENTS
Marieta Maglas 03 May 2018

Beautiful poem -enjoyed reading it. Voted 10.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 April 2018

Belated congratulations dear Perdita for this beautiful piece of poetry being chosen as POD! I have already voted....10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 April 2018

Here to revisit this wonderful poem, Perdita to extend my congratulations for having this masterly crafted write poem of the day.

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Anna Lin 14 April 2018

Human weaknesses lovely depicted, much joy between the lines.

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Red X 14 April 2018

The only thing that can improve this poem is a nice glass of bleach.

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Rini Shibu 14 April 2018

Congratulations for poem of the day..beautifully penned

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Bri Edwards 14 April 2018

p.s. it appears that the dove on the left is handcuffed to the branch. or is that a love bracelet i see? ? i love birds; thanks for the photo. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 14 April 2018

! I lost the rest of my comment, but ………it is in my brain, sort of; let me reconstruct it. A favorite line: “The Lovey-dovey will walk their hair white! ”..i assume “hair white” refers to snow accumulating on hatless heads as lovers stroll hand-in-hand/glove-in-glove. I’m enjoying the ‘intelligent’ and ‘skillful’ writing. I guess I’m a smug busybody who happens to be a glutton as well. Nice rhyming; thanks for NOT trying to rhyme with “mink”, I think. Bri :)

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Bri Edwards 14 April 2018

i RARELY visit a poem-of-the-day (member poem) , but PH is taking its time letting me do something else, so..... or maybe it is the computer, not PH. (to continue) ...

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 April 2018

The Lovey-dovey will walk their hair white! corresponds to your fine graphic... the whiteness, the playfullness, the joy..... fine.. a poem.. tony

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Kelly Kurt 14 April 2018

It will snow here again tomorrow. Nothing I can do about it, so I will enjoy it and wait a little longer to plant my flowers. Congrats, Perdita.

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Carl Roussell 14 April 2018

Your poem lets one be content with a late snow. Nice poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 14 April 2018

Congrats! A very well selection as members' poem of the day, nice poem.

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Robert Murray Smith 14 April 2018

A nice poem. Imaged filled.

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 April 2018

The romantic hope! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 14 April 2018

A beautiful picture for a magnificent poem on spring. The snow fall is so romantic and Jovial a moment to celebrate. Thanks for the sharing and congratulations for being picked as members POD. Sorry for not being able to greet you in Chinese.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 April 2018

A jovial poem that expresses joy of April month - A snowfall in April with two lovey dovey Doves. A fun filled poem Peridita. Hearty congratulations.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 April 2018

Dear Perdita, such a lovely poem of the day... congrats for being chosen... huge 10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 April 2018

浪漫的希望融化在四月的爱之中。今年四月的积雪非常重视像河流一样为他人提供无私服务。降雪和温柔的爱情一样好。许多人的心因一阵雪花融化而下坠。在这首诗中绘制出一幅不错的图像,图像很好。这首诗是当天成员诗选的完美诗句。恭喜!这绝对是一首杰出的诗

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 April 2018

The romantic hope is melted with touch of love of April. This April's snow has great importance to flow like a river to provide selfless service to others. Snowfall is good as like as fall of tender love. Many hearts are glowed by touch of snow' melting and falling. A nice imagery is drawn in this poem with nice image. This poem is perfect poem chosen as the member poem of the day. CONGRATULATIONS! This is definitely an outstanding poem...10

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