Tuesday, April 28, 2009

April's Away. Comments

Rating: 5.0

All too soon the countryside,
Now fresh greened and sprouting more
Than spring, looks out for wider
Room, shakes it's newborn blossoms
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Fay Slimm
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A superb nature poem with joy abiding. It is really very beautiful and the poem took me away to April's magic. Karin Anderson 10/10

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Tsira Goge 28 April 2009

Fay, Very beautiful a poem... 10.. Tsira

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maggie murray 28 April 2009

lovely poem of fading April Fay..Maggie

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Sid John Gardner. 28 April 2009

Summer Just around the corner Fay? Nice write...Sid x/

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Fiona Davidson 28 April 2009

And April is leaving as a very damp one...beautiful write Fay...as always it is like taking a walk through nature with you...Fi 10+++

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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