Monday, August 8, 2011

April, March! Soldiers Search For Hunger March - A1 Story Comments

Rating: 4.8

World has advanced in many days...
Yet in 21st Century poverty retains in umpteen ways;
Hunger glinted in his eyes...
He does begging and petty thievery, at the same time!
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Harindhar Reddy
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Queeny Gona 15 April 2012

Hats off to your way of writing. I loved the way you threw light on all the major issues that a society faces in developing countries like India and as such the whole World. I felt the pain of being poor when I was going through the write up! Clear cut view of poverty and solution is what I am looking forward to hear from you in your next write up.

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Harindhar Reddy 20 April 2020

I'm pleased with thoughtful review 🙏🙏👍👍

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Crimson Love 03 December 2011

'Labourers in construction breaking the stones... And lifting the bricks while scorching sun is the witness! They work bodily, resembles awkward dance of a heap of bones' Very vivid imageries, it is a fantastic write! : D

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Harindhar Reddy 20 April 2020

Thank you for your wonderful comment 🙏🙏👍👍

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Jacqui Broad 09 November 2011

I saw a different side of you... I'm speechless by this amazing poem. If I must read part 2 now my heart will break... A powerful, frustrated shout of a true poet who can't stand the cruelty of humans to humankind. What else is poverty than the abandoning of the less fortunate. Makes Hitler seems like a kind man... Your poem has touched me deeply...

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Harindhar Reddy 21 May 2020

Hmmm thanks.......

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Harindhar Reddy 21 May 2020

Thank you for a nice comment on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Jacqui Broad 09 November 2011

I saw a different side of you... I'm speechless by this amazing poem. If I must read part 2 now my heart will break... A powerful, frustrated shout of a true poet who can't stand the cruelty of humans to humankind. What else is poverty than the abandoning of the less fortunate. Makes Hitler seems like a kind man... Your poem has touched me deeply...

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Jacqui Broad 09 November 2011

I saw a different side of you... I'm speechless by this amazing poem. If I must read part 2 now my heart will break... A powerful, frustrated shout of a true poet who can't stand the cruelty of humans to humankind. What else is poverty than the abandoning of the less fortunate. Makes Hitler seems like a kind man... Your poem has touched me deeply...

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Harindhar Reddy 20 April 2020

I'm pleased with your amazing review 🙏🙏👍👍

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Shanavas Maideen 28 October 2011

Though he is with bare foot who knows as bub, he is cute! Owing to the troubles he met, made him mute. He can fill the rivers with poverty's tears... His eyes were pale and mouth opened for food cabbage! Yes poverty is crime, it gifts hunger to the poor people. My hear melt like camphor after reading this poem. Well said what i like in the poem is the truth I see in it. Good attempt!

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Harindhar Reddy 20 April 2020

Thank you my friend....

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Vipins Puthooran 26 October 2011

Yes, Poverty is the biggest disease of all, How can we diagnose its signs and symptoms or cure its complications, , Another great poem from a great writer! ! ! Your poems make a light into the sufferings of human race, , You are a great philanthropist! ! ! Tops marks, , more than a 10++++++

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Harindhar Reddy 20 April 2020

I'm pleased with gracious review 🙏👌👌

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