Sunday, April 13, 2014

April In The Lawn! Comments

Rating: 3.5

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Shahzia Batool
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Brian Jani 29 June 2014

no matter how short it id this little poem is good and has room for expansion

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Unwritten Soul 20 April 2014

...such a calm light beam_Soul

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Dinesan Madathil 20 April 2014

So occasional haikus too are up your sleeves Shahziaji... A fine break of the kind!

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Neela Nath Das 16 April 2014

Brevity is the soul of this small wonder! A lovely Haiku, Shazia.10 ke upar he.

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Tribhawan Kaul 16 April 2014

Lovely haiku from your pen, Shahzia. Last line speaks volumes. Enjoying life fully in this spring season particularly after retirement with relaxed bent of mind.

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Valsa George 15 April 2014

Spring is here and Elysian fields, brought down with flowers of exquisite beauty and fragrance! A sweet haiku! A10

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 14 April 2014

Blissful poem describing the beauty around. Short and sweet haiku. Thank you.

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Valerie Dohren 13 April 2014

Lovely haiku Shahzia.

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