Thursday, December 20, 2007

April Fools Comments

Rating: 4.2

Spring. A great yellow stain.
Forsythias burst and daffodils explode.
Swallows hurry back from Mexico
and are bitten by
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David Kowalczyk
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Marvin Bell 13 December 2008

Difficult to determine whether this treacle should be classified as jejune or as infantile....

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Greenwolfe 1962 18 August 2008

I thought the purpose and the meaning were clear enough given the title to make this a poem to recommend. The creativity does not add to the clarity but it demonstrates a focus on the meaning that was important. GW62

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Slobodan Polovina 13 August 2008

Suddenly, I feel nauseous. Very nauseous.

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David Kowalczyk

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