Spring. A great yellow stain.
Forsythias burst and daffodils explode.
Swallows hurry back from Mexico
and are bitten by
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I thought the purpose and the meaning were clear enough given the title to make this a poem to recommend. The creativity does not add to the clarity but it demonstrates a focus on the meaning that was important. GW62
Difficult to determine whether this treacle should be classified as jejune or as infantile....