Thursday, April 2, 2009

April Fool's Trick Haiku Comments

Rating: 4.1

The Arachnid says

'Come into my parlor now
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
COMMENTS
I Am Charlie 10 August 2009

Grins...oh, i agree with the lot down below. I think the wizard one is my personal favourite. and John Tiong Chunghoo's there isn't one to ignore, either.

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Irene Clark-hogg 31 July 2009

A very interesting Haiku string. The first and last are my favourites. Irene

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Chuck Audette 10 June 2009

Fun. I love a good prank for April 1st. I have one, 'Haiku Errors', that seems relevant and you might enjoy. -chuck

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John Tiong Chunghoo 12 April 2009

i love your haikus lorraine here is mine; april fool's day he asks if he has really been fooled

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Maria Barbara Korynt 10 April 2009

Nice poem constructed on the basis of the haiku. Alone from time to time I am writing so, all the more for me like. The haiku is teaching saving and he is eliminating the excess of unnecessary words. It is necessary to put into this minimal form as the most contents, to capture the meaning and the time, in which something is happening. It contrary to appearances isn't simple. For you oneself that's all is pretending. You prefer principle 5 - 7 - 5 what in the haiku the primary importance has and is a great impediment. Very much I like him. (10 v.) . I am greeting and I thank you :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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John Weber 07 April 2009

I love the way your pen plays with fragile notions here, Lorraine, dancing within the familiar Haiku form without surrendering to naked syllables. Your message strikes a chord with my sensibilities! Warm regards, John. Thanks for your generous comments, Lorraine! :)

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i likes this extended haiku. nice..

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Reshma Ramesh 07 April 2009

haha! ! great for laughs..........

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 03 April 2009

Perfect April fool's trick haiku, unique in its own type. April 01 is my birthday. Its been now 55 years that I am being fooled consistently. Regards Naseer

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