April flipped herself in
Like a brand new paragraph
For i'd left off in March
And winter 'twas still the subject matter
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Theo, You are so powerfull with words and thought! Love your poetry! Dorothy Now I must journey to more of your pages...
very nice again Theo, the opening on this was great, draws the reader in. -Bernie
Great work Theodora...'April flipped herself in like a brand new paragraph' was a great jump start and 'Take out the chill and hold on me still during a most troubling dark of night' was a memorable finish! In between, I liked the vivid descriptions and your craft! Top marks! -Michael
I love this poem Theodora, I like the flow of it, the rhyme is fabulous, it generates a peaceful feeling. It's just an all around great poem Theodora, thanks for writing this-Melvina-
An irresistable title... you are one clever lady. t x
Thank you Dorothy and Bernie, Your words mean ever so much to me! Blessings, Theo