Sunday, February 4, 2018

April Days Comments

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My flowers died when it was April yet,
An eternal eclipse darkened my sight,
And a heavy air filled my lungs
How could I ever love the enchanting sunrise and the melancholic sunset?
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Ghazaleh Bayat
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Mahtab Bangalee 15 July 2019

my ears could no longer catch the waves of beautiful sounding birds......// beautiful poem shared

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Fabrizio Frosini 05 August 2018

I simply add my voice to Tom's... ;)

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Ghazaleh Bayat 05 August 2018

Thank you so much dear Dr Fab :)

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 August 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Ghazaleh. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Tom Billsborough 02 August 2018

My attention has been drawn to you by the fact that I'm editing a series of poems by women writers for Fabrizio. Luckily yours are in my allocation and I marvelled at the quality of your verse. You even mention two of my favourite poets Sylvia Plath and dear Anne Sexton! This poem displays the touch of a genuine poet too. It's going into my list of favourites

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