Monday, April 24, 2006

April Comments

Rating: 4.9

Honeysuckle cascading along the garden wall,
Bees hum, and insects everywhere abound,
The cuckoo sends us all his two-note call,
So many voices in one glorious sound.
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Ernestine Northover
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Lynn Petty 17 February 2016

Now we are talking poetry! ! Very, very nice. Well constructed and metered. Wonderful imaging. GOOD! ! No, not good but, very good. Regards, Lynn

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Andrew Blakemore 13 March 2008

This is so beautifully written. Spring is my favourite time of year and you've captured all of its wonder here. Andrew x

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Nimal Dunuhinga 08 May 2006

Excellent! Erne your April is much stronger than the calendar April as it fades within the year.

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Sid John Gardner. 01 May 2006

Marvellous Ernestine really enjoyed this one.Many thanks for sharing.April can be a lottery but you have reminded us how the re-birth of nature after winter warms the spirit. Best regard from Sid John xx

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Uriah Hamilton 30 April 2006

This is beautiful! ! Maybe my favorite poem of yours! !

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Esther Leclerc 24 April 2006

This poem reminds me of many places I've lived... starting with the honey suckle plants in the back yard of my childhood home. We used to drink the 'honey'... Thank you for this lovely ode to April. Love to you and yours, Esther

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Scarlett Treat 24 April 2006

Lovely poem to the 'Joy of Spring! ' There are, however, a couple commas out of place that are distracting. Scarlett

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Janice Walkden 24 April 2006

This is lovely - its like being in a beautiful garden in Springtime - senses awakened. Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you.

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Duncan Wyllie 24 April 2006

You are certainly on form Ernestine, I could drink this in, Love Duncan

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