Thursday, April 2, 2009

April Comments

Rating: 5.0

The robin don't mind
if it's the poor side of town
and everything is run down
gonna sing anyway.
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W.I. Stoneberger
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Ashraful Musaddeq 06 May 2009

April is wonderful 10 ++

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Teresa Dearing 13 April 2009

Ah.. nicely said, I hear the robin's song and see the yellow of the flower... Spring on the dead end is easier than winter to bear, For all those who tiredly etch out their existance there, Thou life, death, and the seasons are for everyone to share, Natures joys oft' go unnoticed by those with so much care.

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Maria Barbara Korynt 10 April 2009

Beautiful, great written poem. Excellent form. Very well you are using the rhyme. I read with pleasure and 10v. - real :) Greetings. Thank you :) Maria Barbara

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Fiona Davidson 02 April 2009

This is quite true William...beautiful poem thank you...if we cared less about ourselves and more about nature things would be so much better...Fi 10+++

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