Friday, September 26, 2008

April Comments

Rating: 5.0

I recall now to minds desire
when first we met in fields of fire,
cowering there upon the stairs,
your presence caught me unawares.
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Neil Graham Marsden
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Dowell Oba 07 October 2008

Wow! What a cool poem Neil, filled with so much rhythmic musicality of a romantic meeting at April. You remind me of the romantic sensuous poet 'John Keats'. I love the entire rhymes.

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