Wednesday, March 5, 2008

April Comments

Rating: 4.3

April’s non-stop showers
Brings Mays lushes flowers
Shows the rainbows in the sky
To what extent I don’t know why
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lovely piece of poem...............beautifully expressed...........take care

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Linda Weischedel 10 March 2008

This is a cool poem Nick! ! !

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Thad Wilk 08 March 2008

Excellent imagery of these capturing moments of April Nick! *10*! Friend Thad

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 08 March 2008

Vivid is the April you have composed here, Nick. Very picturesque too.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 08 March 2008

very good one looks like W.W in the making.keep writing

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~ Soldier ~ ~girl~ 06 March 2008

thats a really good poem i like it a lot you have a really nice writting gift keep it up

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nick trager

nick trager

hinsdale hospital
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