Puzzling dialogues grow facile,
April is a month of dates,
The cherry-plum blossoms in April,
And for the love it happily waits.
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I read in June but feel some April cherries' memories with me now :) Nice write...i wonder how strong Summer in Georgia hold you back to April...Maybe u need write 'August'..lol Joking. Like it_Unwritten SOul
Tsira, well done: good rhymes and nice words. Let alone, this month is very special because of 1st April. Any time I meet the word 'April', I remember I haven't finished my poem about an April fool. Sorry, but i don't know when it'll happen. Konstantin.
A really beautiful picture of spring Tsira, great poem. Best wishes, Andrew
A refreshing poem with appealing conceptual phrasing. Thanks, arya
TS Eliot's April was the cruelest. Your 'April is a month of dates', differently expressed poem with a positive view. Yes,10.
Tsira, what a lovely description of April. April is a months of dates all right. Just beautiful my friend. Top marks and thanks for sharing it. David
The last two lines are striking, 'I would have left creation' really provokes the reader.
I sort of made fun of April in my poem 'November Love' but you described it wonderfully. GW62
the beauty of spring, how it slowly arrives with the melting of the snow, the breeze, and the warm and infectious laughter of children in school that set the spring mood going. the coming of spring is like the birth of a new child. good write tsira.
'Laughing with gleaming smile, Luminous eyes and flowing tresses, Light brown skin soft and supple, Let me compare thee to the splendour Of Spring, together for the first time You and I; seems befitting as Nature renews itself once again. Miracle! ' -from my Song For Spring,1995 Tsira, a delightful read. xx Gregory
Very nicely done. It reminded me of the first poem I ever wrote, it was about love in April and November. GW62
Spring... renewel..... Birth of a new year... Excellent poem... Rogerx.
April is a month of dates. Beautiful poem.