Wednesday, September 13, 2006

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O sweet envelopment of vine,
Warming me heavily with (wonder) damp
Lilacs and soft dew underneath my feet;
I am nakedly clothed by the rain from your bow
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Walt Ostrander
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Joseph Daly 14 September 2006

Good to see you are back Walt. This is a lovely piece that drifts along. It actually read longer than it is. I think that is due to the fact that this reader lingers awhile on each word.

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Walt Ostrander

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