April Comments

Raymond, a piece from the memory of the heart. Enjoyed reading this honest poem. Ian

very well written poem Jordan about a life experience keep up your good work

'life is not measured by the number of breaths we take but, by the moments that take our breath away'. this poem is enchanting and memorable as it seems to come from a very sincere place within you. read it once and the message was clear. the title's what caught me. april is a strange month or as t.s eliot put it, 'the cruelest month'. i guess cause it breeds the destitution of winter with the zest of spring. you captured a feeling here- the most noble goal in poetry. foster p.s. i think there's a typo in the line 'born of you pain' i think you meant YOUR pain.