Saturday, January 17, 2009

Approaching Winter Comments

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Approaching winter, Earth holds its breath.
Trees, unweighted by life
Scratch the sky.
The wipers scrape, waving to each other.
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Jason Doyle
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Children live under a sodium sky And never wonder why. .... beautiful description of season.... we must love nature....good poem read mine why do we neglect nature... child...school

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Gutter Box 17 January 2009

Very descriptive poem...great job.

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Sid John Gardner. 17 January 2009

Nice write Jason, Good Imagery.Thanks for sharing. Sid.

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