Tuesday, November 24, 2020

Approaching Winter Comments

Rating: 5.0

On paddy-spike dew,
Autumnal winds rewind cold
Red Crossbills nesting
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 November 2020

A well composed poem.... Truly brilliant and superb....5 stars *****

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Varsha M 25 November 2020

Beautiful haiku composition. Red Crossbills nestle Time to beat chilling weather Until spring brings back hope.

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Anjandev Roy 25 November 2020

Fantastic short work.........thank u....anjandev roy.

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poet me poet 24 November 2020

IN COLD EVERYTHING SHRINKS WHAT OF PADDY MB

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Khairul Ahsan 24 November 2020

Yes, the Winter is approaching. Last night was colder than other nights of the week. A nice haiku on an Autumnal scene. The poem gets from me 5 Stars*****, the maximum!

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Kesav Easwaran 24 November 2020

Good imagery of winter life. Haiku brevity. Five stars

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