Tuesday, December 29, 2015

Approach Comments

Rating: 0.0

Rain Is Falling. Winter Approaches. I Drive Towards It. In The Slow Rain. In The Semi-darkness. Cello Music Is Playing In The Car. The Deep Sad Sound Of The Cello. It Almost Swamps Me. Routine Endeavours To Swamp Me. The Everyday Paying Of Bills.

But I Paint Men Walking In A City Of Icebergs And Crystal. Some Of The Icebergs Are Red. I Paint A Woman Swimming In Green Wavy Water. Surrounded By Desert Mesas. Bright Orange In The Sunlight. With Darker Orange For Shadows.
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
James Mclain 29 December 2015

And if so that I do surrounded by ryhme verse. Two being one no thoughts for the other and still they manage like you. Ocean's rise the moon the tide white sand beneath, you have found. Two have asked all the questions that one alone could not ask. Twin word's they all sound alike when part of two is only one. I have terried to long as it is and where night is here and as long as those stars burn bright over head so all the word's in the world that convey the thought that two are better than one.. beautiful write may I say.. iip

0 0 Reply
Julia Woodman

Julia Woodman

Zimbabwe
Close
Error Success