Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, October 18, 2014

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Any child may like and want to be free
To dream for future under tree
Imagine for ripe fruit at will
But that remains illusion still
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 October 2014

Many of us will relate to the sentiments behind this poem. Alan Graham2 hours ago Expresses the dilemma of all parents well but try to keep your rhyming going right to the end.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 October 2014

Very well done. Meena Somasundaram14 minutes ago As is always rhymes come to you naturally. Comment +1 i like it Helen Setta 13 minutes ago To dream for future under tree... Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 October 2014

Nice Custard Cube14 minutes ago Nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 October 2014

Any child may like and want to be free To dream for future under tree

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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