Wednesday, May 23, 2007

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Rating: 2.8

Feeling fine one day,
next day struck by illness,
feeling like you will never dance again,
when sweet health again returns,
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Barry Van Allen
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Chuck Audette 24 May 2007

liked this, the repeated lines and rhymes, although wasn't too sure about the meter in the last stanza (but I'm not too sure about the meter in any of my poems, either) . -chuck

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Dee Daffodil 23 May 2007

Ok...I'm not reading any more of your poems...you're just getting too darned deep for me! ! Hugs, dee

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