Sunday, February 28, 2021

Appreciate Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shouldn't we appreciate
The lines on ones face
Can't we just accept
This is The human race
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Lyn Paul
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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 September 2021

What a race we are Throwing darts at each other.....so true!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 02 May 2021

Wow bravo well said, this is one of your very best, crafted in a brill meaningful inspiring to compassion with pearls of wisdom indeed. Kudos the world ought to heed this.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 19 April 2021

So much more becomes possible when we think with our hearts. A wonderful poem!

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Captain Cur 04 April 2021

We must humble ourselves to a greater power and free ourselves of ego. No small feat, since we have different gods and beliefs. So then tolerance is the only key to unlock the conundrum!

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Captain Cur 04 April 2021

A humanizing and frustrating write! Can man and woman ever truly live in harmony with one another? I believe we first must learn to respect and cherish nature and the earth and truly understand our place in this world.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 01 March 2021

Thats what i keep saying all the time. One love, one earth, one destiny, death.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 28 February 2021

I had better appreciate the lines on my own face... I keep getting more and more of them all the time!

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David Wood 28 February 2021

Nicely penned Lyn, the human race is very un human at times. More so in the political arena. A good 5*

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Kostas Lagos 28 February 2021

Our nature is to hate, our destination to love. Marvelous poem!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 February 2021

I'm alone but not lonely... appreciated... this one too!

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