Friday, June 5, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

Am I the apple of your eye?
Or the core of your heart?
Perhaps the maggots in the compost under the sink.
I do not know,
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Maya Garza
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a beautiful poem with nice flow..very well penned..++++

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Kesav Easwaran 05 June 2009

not even the glance...and you hate not! well, nice expressions...utterly bitterly sweet! ...thanks Maya...10

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