Monday, April 10, 2006

Applesauce Comments

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Mushy, fruity, gooey, yummy
Swallow it, goes into my tummy
The stuff I crave to taste
The stuff I won't let go to waste
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Jade chiKahn
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Crystal Johnson 10 April 2006

I really did like this one! It's amazing how you can find something as simple as applesauce and make a poem out of it. It was very creative and a bit funny. (But in a good way) :) Not many people could write a poem about applesauce and pull it off, but you certainly did! It was very good. I loved it. -Crystal-

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