one apple, two apples, three apples, four
give me an apple, and i’ll love you even more!
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It is a nice poem. A healthy poem for our healthy body system.
Eat them both and.be a tiger. Well done my friend
what a poem, it's amazing Rachel...... Both are sweet with juices in One by squeezing and other to bite. If one fulfills the other brings sunshine. apple and orange a royal combine..........................
What a poem! I shall give it my younger brother for reading it in school.
Delightful and I am happy to read your poem.Beautiful poem, Rachel
I am a teen aged boy I like your poetry, nowadays I am busy in exams. This poem is so amusing that my tension of studies was relieved.
I was thinking that this poem had nothing really to do with apples and oranges but had to do with love...it's effects where everything is good and makes sense but the last line threw me, then again, im a slow and out of touch poet but never the less...I love this poem.
I happen to love oranges and apples. If I could plant a tree of each it would be delightful. The health benefits are great as always. Such good expressions and lilting verses. Enjoyed.
The poem tells us the fruit is good for us, , , there is nothing better than to make a woman fruity..yummy poem indeed...regards
....a delicious, fruitalicous, write dear......full of beautiful flavors and colours! .....
Wow! we need not to go any where. all types of treatment available here. indeed poetry is remedy of all disease and 100% true. Congrt our doctor poet no poet doctor. moon n stars are getting us bore. i solely appreciate your contribution. i was searching some funny poem.10 ++++
Dear Sunpriness, I read and appreciated this poem very much. I know you don't understand Urdu (National Language of Pakistan, widely spoken in India as well) but I have translated it in Urdu for my grand children. I hope you shall enjoy reading the translation. For understanding it just read your poem again.
This is a wonderful poem - it's so full of joie de vivre - and I especially like the long lines that are fleet and mercurial. it's important that this kind of poem of appreciation doesn't drag and your lines fairly fly off the page. And you buried a few themes among the fruits, for example, the reference to sitting with your TRUE LOVE and sharing the sweetness of the fruit in the sweetness of their presence. This poem really connected with your readers as the comments prove and one of them promises a gift of oranges from India. What a special reward for making the effort of writing poetry!
I love this very pleasant poem Enjoy the juices Healthy and delicious
Tiger I am, I roar like a beast! Fruit, full of sugar will grow yeast! : -0 poetry is an itch, but somebody has to deal with it; -)
apples and oranges, are a perfect fruit, in a picnic to share especially with your true love, to show you really care! beautiful poem shared great 10++++++++++