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A very small space on a foot path, all
Love to travel for a while
First visitor is twilight along with birds
In melody that rhyme a bit with a resonance
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A story within a story~ The young fruit vendor seems so kind of heart, happy, and dedicated to her work. But it is revealed that she carries a sadness in her heart. Very interesting, I'm left wondering what the backstory is here.
Many thanks Nika.......I am humbled.......yes this is about a woman of low profile who has been deserted by her husband resolves to be independent by being the bread winner for herself and her children she loves the most come what may to taking to street as a fruit vendor or something destiny may ask for but her children want their daddy back home for they love him the most
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8/15/2025 12:11:18 AM # 1.0.0
A story that builds slowly but surely until it makes your readers' hearts ache with compassion for this woman selling her produce out of a cart, struggling to take care of her children against horrid odds. I think you structured this poem exactly right to build the readers' awareness and investment in her plight. 10
Many thanks Susan.......I am truly humbled