Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
Tuesday, April 15, 2014

~ Apples Comments

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~ Apples

'Children brush your teeth, ' they said.
We brushed till they rattled in our head.
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Adeline Foster
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Clarence Prince 04 February 2015

Everyone's teeth should have a gloss. Very true, surely this is a lovely poem about brushing teeth! Thanks for sharing it, Adeline!

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Sina Farajzadeh 06 July 2014

Hehe. Hi. It is a nice poem. An apple a day keeps the doctor (dentist in this case) away! Well I live in Iran, Urmia city (North West of Iran) which is famous for its apples and grapes. We have a garden of apple and I like this fruit. Thanks for this poem.

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Sheri Brown 07 June 2014

I love this well written beauty, it's something about wisdom it out smart anything they may come up with just good ole fashion gut smarts this piece reveals that Grandmas know best. I love the flow of your gem. Thanks for sharing.

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Shania K. Younce 21 May 2014

I think this such a cute poem. Bien!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 04 May 2014

superb write and interesting too

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Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
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