Sunday, April 5, 2009

Apples Comments

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Apples falling to the ground
Hitting the soft, warm earth
Stirring the scent of death and decay
In the wake of a little girl's curse
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Lauren Joy
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Jake Erkens 05 April 2009

Wonderful description! Beautifully penned. I actually abhor apples, but this poem is excellent. Odd topic, but you have made it interesting using poetic and writing techniques. good job. Jake

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Lauren Joy

Lauren Joy

Melbourne, VIC
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