Your sunny cheeks
are as red
as the autumn apple
and as shiny
...
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Could anything be more beautiful than a smile on the apple cheeks of a dear child? Heart warming poem, thank you for share!
Very sweet, apple red cheeks of a child...priceless and sure gives happiness to us all, last line seals it up perfectly...regards
A nice poem that put a smile on my face. Very well put.
It's a good poem, , , , the fruit of life's tree....love this one...10+++
Apple story just amaze me :) ....you know if your child is gracious apple fruit of life that is because it come from a strong and inspiring tree...and good tree is you and your care provide a branch of love to grow 'apple' as red cheek you can see...U proud of your child and i proud for you because it from the tree..it root all :) _Unwritten Soul
A beautiful discription of the love between a grownup and a child. Very lovely to read and the flow is great.
Isn't it funny? ! A minute before you made me cry and now I' smile! ! In Japanese tongue, there is a sickness called 'ringo byo' (apple sickness) sometimes children gets something like a cold, that makes kids cheeks red..so instead of enjoying your poem like all the people do, I get shivers as i always do by thinking of kids sufferings.. ..My laughs are triggered by the differences brought by language or living place.. Anyway..you got another 10
A head on poem of a mother's love.The metaphor of the apples is perfectly engaging to the reader.
Warm and enchanting. I like what you see from your poetic window on the world.10, of course. As always, Sandra
peaceful! beautiful poem! !
Thankyou for your much appreciated comment. Sally