Friday, July 10, 2009

Apple Of Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mistakes and regrets
Pain through the weeks
That's what you have to live with
Because of one stupid mistake
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Tori Fleck Fournelle
COMMENTS
Tess Bybee 11 September 2009

This poem is very good. Great job

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Nangula Immanuel 26 August 2009

I love the way you used the metaphor! It was a well thought out poem! Very nice tori! : -)

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Ashley Davis 10 July 2009

Very passionate loved every second! keep it up! gave it a 10!

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Tori Fleck Fournelle

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