A man and a woman in an exotic garden
Plucking mellow fruits and musky flowers,
In the crystal clear waterfall of infinity
Hand in hand they are taking shower.
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Soon Satan with the forbidden fruit appears With joy she makes a glass of delicious juice, They drink and desire burns to let us know That the apple is merely just a silly excuse. Yes apple was a lame excuse, Adam, Eve and Satan did what God wanted to be done.
Thrilling expression. A captivating poem beginning with attractiv introduction. Marvellous depiction of human nature......10
Awesome, we humans are extra smart to pass on our mistakes by blaming one or the other thing/things. True human nature well explored and lucidly put in the form of a beautiful poetry. Loved it....10+++++++
lovely imagery