Tuesday, September 29, 2015

Apple Is Just An Excuse Comments

Rating: 5.0

A man and a woman in an exotic garden
Plucking mellow fruits and musky flowers,
In the crystal clear waterfall of infinity
Hand in hand they are taking shower.
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Sanjukta Nag
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Vishal Sharma 19 October 2015

lovely imagery

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Akhtar Jawad 30 September 2015

Soon Satan with the forbidden fruit appears With joy she makes a glass of delicious juice, They drink and desire burns to let us know That the apple is merely just a silly excuse. Yes apple was a lame excuse, Adam, Eve and Satan did what God wanted to be done.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 September 2015

Thrilling expression. A captivating poem beginning with attractiv introduction. Marvellous depiction of human nature......10

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M Asim Nehal 29 September 2015

Awesome, we humans are extra smart to pass on our mistakes by blaming one or the other thing/things. True human nature well explored and lucidly put in the form of a beautiful poetry. Loved it....10+++++++

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