Tuesday, July 16, 2013

Apple (Inspired!) Comments

Rating: 4.0

Sometimes i think
is it good or is it bad to be an apple of one's eyes?
if there was no apple
then God would have selected some other fruit for the existence...
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Shahzia Batool
COMMENTS
Passionate Reader 28 August 2013

The title is arresting so is the whole poem. So interesting and enjoyable! ! ! :) You havent missed a single detail related to apple. to all my siblings, there’s my request For some day If I be your guest Do not offer to me the BiGG Apple It’s better to have a simple glass of water Mixed with purity of affection! ! ! Yes. true! ! ! :))

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Sun Shine 27 July 2013

It is remarkable how closely the history of the apple is connected... Impressive!

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David Wood 19 July 2013

I never though about writing a poem about an apple. I must give it some thought!

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Heather Wilkins 17 July 2013

through out history the symbol of the apple has been used. however I believe there was no apple (fruit) in the garden. enjoyed this poem

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Valerie Dohren 16 July 2013

And an apple for the teacher too - Pink Lady is my favourite. A very novel write Shahzia.

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Geetha Jayakumar 16 July 2013

Extremely Beautiful... I really enjoyed reading your poem..something quiet different.. Thank you for the sweet comment for my poem(Writing a Love Letter) . Thank you.

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Xelam Kan™ 16 July 2013

Lolz, Indeed a fine satirical mimicry on the APPLE. Newton was surely a blessed soul had Apple instead of watermelon.... And if Apple Inc reads this poem will definitely sue against you..... Enjoy reading.

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Ramesh Rai 16 July 2013

extremely beautiful and magnificent write. you have created more handsome as well as elaborated its significance. thnx sister for so nice job.

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Shahzia Batool

Shahzia Batool

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