Saturday, September 22, 2012

Apple Children Comments

Rating: 4.5

The fruit trees have not been baptised
children`s souls in limbo, in mist

Cold green fruit hangs in the rain,
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Leslie Philibert
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Roseann Shawiak 09 October 2013

The first four lines made perfect sense.

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Joshua Fegley 23 February 2013

I like it. Not a fan of priests though. Creepy buggers.

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Terry Collett 24 September 2012

A fine poem both in imagery and the language used.

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Leslie Philibert

Leslie Philibert

London, England
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