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I can taste the apples and the cider.

Apples always make the best poetry fruit! Interesting poem! Brian

Max Reif imaginatively read this on his website, acidplanet.com Thank you Max, you did a beautiful job! Admiringly, Linda

A great visual story, wonderful rhymes and flow. A core truth -a pretty woman always upsets the apple cart. I like the parallel between the perfect woman, and that perfect apple. Think I have to make this a my favorite poem.10++ chuck

Excellent storytelling, Linda. Your use of words is, probably consciously, reminiscent of Robert Frost. Your rhymes are seamless. I'm still pondering what the 'moral' is. It will probably dawn on me soon.

A lovely moral tale well told. The fabulist's art is not lost on you. Lovely work. It tells one story and underneath is a deeper tale just as well told. I bow to you.10 from me. Happy Chanukah, Hugh